aww cute!

(and now prepare for a rather long comment)

you, meh dear, really need to clean up your account. there were tons of deviations that you had already looked at just sitting in your inbox.

reagrding your picture, personally i would have probably chosen a different theme because if the girl really did "manage mischief", why would she be hiding, hrmm...? O__o

don't take any of these the wrong way, hon, just trying to be as helpful as i can :]

feel bettter!

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Now prepare for another long comment.

:*: Your walls are way off. They look like the outside. Also, the window is off place with the wall. Its going straight, while you depict the wall as slanted.

:*: That goes for the curtain too

:*: It looks like you did a fast coloring job on this. Some parts are hard, while others are soft. And those lines...

:*: Also with the window, would the outside be a solid blue? Unless she was underwater... O_O

I also echo what abi said.



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no. 1-- yeah, i get lazy!
no. 2-- maybe her parent was chasing her!?!
no. 3--none taken (wrongly of course)
no. 4--I AM!!! (just a lil bit itchy!)

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no. 1-- thanks for the input, i was trying something new and next time could you be less harsh
no. 2-- look above
no. 3-- i spent two hours on this. at least 30 on the walls.
no. 4-- maybe its a clear day, no trees in the windows line of vision, the sun is to the left (not in pic)

i was just trying to actually DO a backround because people always said that it would make the pic better, apparently it didnt work

Isn't anything right?

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1| I told you I echoed what abi said, I didn't mean it in a bad way. It's critique, its the only way you can get better.

2| [I'm not seeing it]


4| Well, maybe a lighter blue then? Or atleast one little tuft of grass...

And I never said that it was bad, I was just giving you critique. If you don't want critique, then thats fine. Just tell me, and I won't waste my time telling you the critique. And you always don't have to do backgrounds. Some of abi's stuff ([link] , [link] ) doesn't always have background but it looks great.

And just because I gave you a lot of critique, does not mean that you didn't do anything right. As a matter of fact, I like how you colored the curtains. I take time writing the critique for you, so if you dont' want it, I won't try. Okay?

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uno-
dous-i meant read the above numero
tres-okeedokiee
quatro-well abi is better than me so i try do as much as i can.
cinqo- NO! i like getting critiqued, maybe a lil bit less harsh?

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*feels special*

ISH USED AS AN EXAPMLE x33333

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still... it lags down dA, so it doesn't take that much longer to check a box
like i said, if her parentwas chasing her, she really didn't "manage" it, did she? i know, this is really petty but just for future reference...

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DESU DESU

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